Dude, I'm going to give it you how you need it.
If you really want something that will be used.
You need to simplify it down to it's core and make it in vector graphics.
The way you have it now is chalk full of noise that goes directly against professional logo & design aesthetics.
You should spend about 40 hours actively looking through these 2 sites linked below.
here for how professionals make logos:
http://www.brandsoftheworld.com/
and since you have interest in graphic arts you should look through here every day, for current design principles, it is also very entertaining.
http://ffffound.com/
back to your logo.
what I meant about going against design principles, is that the way you have all that stuff happening on the top and sides directs a viewer's focus away from the middle, which you don't want at all. Something like that in theory might work for television but only if the viewer has to look at it for less than 3 seconds.
This is all my opinion, but I hope this constructive criticism helps you in your endeavors.
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. I hope you are about 16 years old, not older... 
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