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March 28, 2011, 02:36:00 PM
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Just rewrote that to be slightly more clear.  I'm not certain what the third sentence was supposed to say.  (It might be clearer to a native Chinese speaker than to me, though.)

lumos 说:
你好,我想对你们的项目帮助你们。要是你给我发送你的论坛帖子,我愿免费地用更好的英语改写它。那(这句话我看不懂)。我希望你们能理解这个帖子,我用谷歌翻译。
现在,我愿意帮助前七个想要这项服务的人。这样我给你们看例子,怎么写更好的英语。然后,我会不停地指导你们。

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Activity: 210
Merit: 106
March 28, 2011, 12:10:55 PM
#2
Just rewrote that to be slightly more clear.  I'm not certain what the third sentence was supposed to say.  (It might be clearer to a native Chinese speaker than to me, though.)

lumos 说:
你好,我想对你们的项目帮助你们。要是你给我发送你的论坛帖子,我愿免费地用更好的英语改写它。那(这句话我看不懂)。我希望你们能理解这个帖子,我用谷歌翻译。
现在,我愿意帮助前七个想要这项服务的人。这样我给你们看例子,怎么写更好的英语。然后,我会不停地指导你们。
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Activity: 157
Merit: 104
March 28, 2011, 10:49:09 AM
#1
 你好,我愿意帮你完成你想做的作业。我可以帮你免费翻译7个你所选的帖子以此来帮助你的英语学习。我希望你会通过它而创建更扎实的商业基础。
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