It would bode well for you if you were a little more descriptive with regards to how the money is being spent, your experience, comp pools, market data and related things.
So, here's a few simple questions that may help you with regards to your document.
- Who are you
- What experience do you have in real estate
- How much money have you overseen in past projects, and what was the return on them
- Where are the properties located
- How strong is the market
- What kind of real estate team do you have & who are the members, as well as their experience
- What is your plan of action if the market tanks
- What assurances do the investors have that the capital doesn't take flight
- What kind of business entity will this be in