Try to proof-read. I think there's some grammatical errors. You should also at least link Satoshi's whitepaper (https://bitcoin.org/bitcoin.pdf). So any reader who are really interested will go and try to read the whitepaper and understand how bitcoin really function.
Another good website to link is (https://bitcoin.org/en/choose-your-wallet) You talked about bitcoin's wallet, again, much better if your reader will have other options and not just the Ledger with your referral link in it.
As what has others been saying, add more content. You should know that content is the king in the web. More quality content more traffic in you website. Goodluck.