I'll concur, for once I started reading, I couldn't find a place to jump off, hence reading till the end.
Now, tell the story from Jessica's PoV while in the trunk musing about her brother.
This is a great idea. I didn't even think of writing it from her viewpoint.Now, tell the story from Jessica's PoV while in the trunk musing about her brother.
Whoa, nice work, reason i always pick up calls no matter what 
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Thanks. Fk.. this was intense, if this was a movie, I'd definitely watch and now I want to know what happens next. You're a good writer dude. A lesson to learn from this is always answer your phone, you never know who could be on the other side.
Well done!
I have a Movie idea that i'm willing to write that would make this look goofy. Very intense plot.Well done!
Does your idea involve the PoV of everybody surrounding the Jessica story, including the dude at the novelty store who sold the knife? What the argument was about from Steve's PoV? How the cop gets excited (in a perverted way) each time he shows a dead body to a loved one? Steve's car was recently purchased from a dealership where the previous owner's name was...wait for it...Jessica, traded in for an expensive ride because she finally was awarded a check from the insurance company due to her late husband legally declared dead after been missing for over seven years? Lastly, somewhere in every PoV story line, there's this same dude seen in the distance, donning the same outfit, and walking the same dog (think Doge)?
That idea?
I might write a murder mystery Regarding Satoshi and incorporate some big names from the forum here and their motives as to why they might be a potential suspect.
Where were you PG when Satoshi posted his last post on December 12, 2010 (The night i suspected he was murdered) can you Account for your Location on that night? Hmmm
It was a Sunday night, and I just left church... no, wait, it was an outside BBQ, for I remember all the snow... Okay, there was no snow, so I must have been at... Are you sure it was Dec. 12, 2010, for I'm beginning to believe you're memory is flawed, whereas mine...
I guess my interesting views stems from thinking outside the...wait for it...
I only dabble in writing, mainly on this forum, daily honing said ability with the help of Google.
I, too, have a story in my head having the working title The Run-on Man. It's about some forum user that has the unique ability to weed out scammers, finding himself having a high-dollar, payable in bitcoins, contract on him to be knocked off, but he doesn't know which group is after him, being there's so many he's ousted, while he continues to travel from safehouse to safehouse, continuing to post, albeit in short Ursprache prose, deviating from his signature grammatically correct run-on sentences, hence the working title, reminiscent of The Running Man staring Arnold Schwarzenegger who, by the way, may have a new movie in the works.
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