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Topic: I will write a poem on any subject, using a scheme you choose. (Read 514 times)

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"Em-bear-assing!" So went the shout!
"Em-bear-assing!" So yelled the crowd!
And thus I hung in shame my neck,
stepped off the soapbox and slunk back
towards the basement whence I came.
A place to hide and veil my shame.

"But what happened?" So you ask.
"But what happened?" No easy task,
but here I give my explanation:
I went without a hesitation
to tell the Bear the Bull will win,
but Bear slew Bull and all his kin.
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Your poem is sad..oh thats so bad
I`m a little kid you know?i need a dad Smiley
I`m glad that i met you but now i`m sad
My poem sucks...thats getting me mad Smiley

It seems i`m not that good lol
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I am a reasonably good poet, I don't claim to be fantastic.

Pick a subject, give me the structure of the poem, and the length you want it to be.  Then I write it for tips.

E.g. (Bears, rhyming, 6 lines)

I saw a happy bear today,
He passed me on his merry way.
"You see my boy," he said to me,
"The crash will come, just wait and see."
I only smiled, and shook my head,
He couldn't see the trap ahead.

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