Topic: I'd really appreciate feedback on my White Paper if people don't mind (10 mins) (Read 103 times)

Thank you SO much for your response

I honestly REALLY appreciate you taking time to give me help and advice and feedback it really does mean a lot I don't deserve is but you've stepped in and helped so thank you

the whitepaper is at this gitub: https://github.com/SirSalty1st/Everything-Bitesized/blob/main/whitepaper

Look, nobody wants you banned. If you have a whitepaper, paste it here. Thats what this forum is for - discussion. But spamming self-promotion isnt the way to go.

Why cant you simplify things and post a direct link to your whitepaper?

Ok, this just gets more confusing. Why should we go trough some youtube channel? And your "Some Amazing Fact's You'll 100% find interesting! - Part One" - video doesn't have discord link. And videos are alarmingly not at all tech related. There's one cryptocurrency playlist with a video that looks like generic AI generated material.

Here's an idea. Post that whitepaper to your github, and share your github nick so we can read it directly without involving a discord server.

Sounds like you really have quite a project and you've actually got a lot of passion behind it. that's a great kick off I totally share your skepticism and absolutely defend it - it's really quite scarce to find such community sites that achieve true self-advocacy with efficient support. This can be achieved through engaging in the most pressing community-relevant topics first. If you are giving us feedback about your experience. Be it content creation or sales. Others will take cognisance of your knowledge. Which may eventually lead to research on the project.

This will get you to take the initiative to give value to others too. For example, if someone asks a question associated with a business, you can present thoughtful advice and pointed out your skills. People could even become willing to listen to your project without considering it spam over time. If you would like to draw ideas from your white paper Or if you want to interact with the staff There are websites open for such discussions. Like Reddit users or startup communities. or has dedicated cryptocurrencies forum. You might also consider a fund site whereby one can listen to your ideas and contribute thereby accessing some piece of that action. All in all, keep up the constructive conversation. And chances to work together will eventually come along naturally. We are forward to hearing more about your future projects!

Thanks guys I appreciate the feedback I realise now that I know even less than I thought I did. I'll try to paste the whitepaper below. I was just really worried about getting banned I didn't post it initially. I really don't claim to be a pro or know exactly what I'm doing but I think I have some good ideas.

I can't paste the whitepaper in here but you can get through by my YouTube channel and find the discord and it's in the SugarDropZ room of the server. Discord link is in the description of my latest videos and my YouTube is same name as on here. It's Youtube.com / @EverythingBitesized

I realise this is asking a lot so I appreciate any feedback or support.

Are you worried because you are unsure of the definition of spam in here? I am not a mod, but i am pretty sure you could type the whole whitepaper as pre-announcement to announcement section.
  
But using 769 words to describe why we should pm you instead of you just giving the link, or typing the whitepaper sure does sound like a some sort of scam.

About that venture capital, that's trickier, because even if you studied how others here have raised money, they might be doing it illegally as well because many of them seem to be clueless on how to raise money legally.

It sounds like you are thinking of launching and promoting a token?

As you say there are oodles already existing.

If you are good at marketing, enough to make a new token fly, surely you don't need investors you can make almost any amount of capital just by applying your skills and resources to existing coins and tokens, in essence prove your ability to make a coin or token successful.

You actually can probably do so well just at that that you will likely not even need to eventually launch a new one of your own as your "stable" of ones you already "mooned" will already make you crazy-rich.


-MarkM-

This is my first post about the project white paper on the internet God's honest truth. Apart from in my discord for the project. The booming project it's intimately entangled WITH not based on as you would put it is a YouTube channel and nothing to do with crypto but crypto can be integrated into it in many cool ways I genuinely have some very interesting concepts with a few of them being original and I know that sounds big headed but I am a very creative lunatic I don't think like sane people do but that gives me an edge when it comes to being meticulous and neurotic about an idea in my head until I've fully fleshed it out as a solid concept before I promote it.

There are existing fundamentals here and I can scientifically prove it through YouTube analytics that simply cannot be argued against as very successful by anyone who can type a sentence into Google. I understand I may be coming across as hostile if that is the case I do apologise but I'm very tired.

But yeah as defensive as I got I haven't posted it anywhere apart from my new discord for the project. I am working on many of my own projects but this is something I'm willing to devote myself full time to and away from a lot of potential payed work to complete this idea to it's fruition if it's given a chance by the right people at the right time at the right place.

I don't expect that all to line up today but one can't be blamed for wanting it I guess.

But asking for anything in the space even a chance is a joke because there's like 10 million coins just registered alone on coin market cap lol why should I bet treated any differently because I can type in a pompous manner to be completely fair mate, so I understand your intitial reservations I just hope that I've cleared up at least a few of them by now.

I'm not trying to make any points or take any shots (or receive any) I'm literally just asking for help, I fully understand if you don't want to but I'm hoping some other people will maybe see my passion and curiosity as genuine and take the 10 mins to read it so they can say whether it's baseless or not then hopefully eventually get an open dialogue flowing between some people in here but again I realise that is asking for a lot given the situation and how new I am I do get your reservations, as i said.

Well since you know that much that your project is just born out of imaginary and have no basic concept on it own since you mentioned in your writing that your project is building on another existing project which makes it lack it own originality and concept, so for that we have to take a closer look to k ow it this project, has the potential to bring about any possible change or even render a form of service of it own.

So that my be the reason why your posts keep being deleted as you said because by including your own original whitepaper it could yield alot of positive results, much more than just writing a wall of text trying to prove a point.

My project plans as ambitious as they are, are tied to an already great and rapidly expanding and semi-successful project- so the ideas have some serious fundamental backing. I don't want to plug 'this' or 'that' directly or specifically on my first post shamelessly unless someone who seems to have some level of moderate respect around here specifically asks in the replies. Even then I can type out without hyperlinks in PMs and in plain text the full white paper as well as send any YouTube analytics if interested. They're good I'll just say that.  Even then you can DM me instead if you want to see it before anyone else. Sounds like a scam but I can write it in plain text DMs I don't have to send you a file or link, not a PDF or even a notepad file I can just copy and paste it I need all the help I can get in terms of feedback and criticism. I would really love to be able to just post it but that would feel like shameless spam not to mention I bet it would get deleted in a heartbeart.

I need to hear it from somewhere 'legit' so to speak and I don't know of a better place to start than in here, I just really don't want to break any rules in fact I would actually want a mod to tell me if and how I should proceed to directly share the whitepaper in here without breaking any rules if that can be allowed if not just in this one instance? I'll start giving a bit of context so you can see if it would actually interest you enough to check it out or not without having to give away any of the sauce.

I'll just say now that there are TONS of monetisation opportunities in the project fundamentally and I get quite technical about it in the white paper. I get very technical in general about UX and marketing too, as well as keeping it a wholly flexible and adaptive idea. I got the conceptual design and functionality of what I want to achieve clearly mapped out though I just lack that vital knowledge and skill that can place all the puzzle pieces together on a fundamental level(Development) as well as people to help advise me of how to move forward with my efforts I can do the marketing apart from I don't know where to start when it comes to getting venture capital and angel investors. I also don't want to jump in bed with someone who doesn't work to my level skill in their own domain and I will just give some general context to my background: I've handled plenty of very expensive marketing campaigns but real ones take cash and a lot of it unless you have a working project not just vaporware.

So 1. What I'm saying is basically I'm here to collaborate and learn from other people. I may have some things to teach, I have a lot of experience in general content creation including a LOT of experience in video production since before the formation of YouTube when I was just a wee kid lol. My mum bought 'the family' a CAMCORDER but it was basically just for me which was really cool of her and It had mini DV cassettes tapes I think they're called and a firewire cable? I was so young, but now I'm 32 and starting to get a bit rough around the edges to be honestly had a bit of a hectic life but I'm a fun guy to be around if not overtly and overly passionate to the point of being extremely cocky and insufferable because of it.

That being said, I understand that someone in here even taking the time to read what I'm writing let alone respond let alone a mod let me post my whitepaper in here directly without it getting deleted I don't deserve any of that I just got here. But I am please asking for as much feedback as possible if possible or if I can't get it here because of rules against spam and self promotion maybe where I can start looking for angel investment but also development I understand no-one wants to work for an as of yet worthless token monetarily but perhaps I could help in other peoples projects I have a lot of marketable skills. I make great promotional content and my YouTube channel (the one this project is intimately entangled with) is absolutely AMAZING if I do say so myself.