I actually feel genuinely sorry for the person that would hire you. Seriously, next time you try using uncommon words, make sure that you use it them correctly. The word "albeit" is used as a formal alternative to "even though" or "although". "Thus", on the other hand, is used in relating to a process or how the action/event took place or was done. The phrase, that should follow it, must be similar to or close to a gerund form. Lastly, I'd like to point out the fact that you were able to misuse capitalization and fail to make use of an apostrophe in the contraction "don't".
Anyway, good luck finding a client!
Anyway, good luck finding a client!
But it's always easier to find someone else's mistakes rather than write error-free text yourself, innit?
ps You style is way too official for a forum reply.
