I would also be interested in re-writing text (Unless, of course, Whiteknight gets the position) I am a native English speaker, and used to do something similar for Japanese speakers in a language exchange (I help fix their English, they fix my Japanese).
I suppose for an example of my work you could see the amazon gift codes I'm selling in my signature.
NOTE: Some of these are probably not exactly worth a bounty, but still a good idea to change, I may post more after my account is verified.
Something I notice quite a bit recently, is the lack of liquid layouts, my screen isn't that small, but I get some cut off for some reason:
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There are no hidden fees whatsoever, everything we charge is listed on this page
charge from you -> charge you
You use a lot of periods, when the sentence would be more fluid with commas.
We profit from the spread, the difference between the bid and ask price. This means you will usually start with a very small initial loss, when a new position is openend.
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We profit from the spread, the difference between the bid and ask price. This means you will usually start with a very small loss, when a new position is opened.
openend -> opened
very small initial loss -> very small loss | Redundant
You may not want to use "Administrative stuff", stuff is informal (although, some sites are going for a very informal approach in their documentation)
https://1broker.com/?c=faq1Broker offers a service where you can trade for live market-prices
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1Broker offers a service where you can trade for live market prices
No dash in market-prices
In the account sign up:
If you don't click on the confirmation link your account gets deleted in the next few days.
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If you don't click on the confirmation link within 2 days, your account will be terminated.
More professional (includes time frame, more formal language)
When unverified:
Your account is currently blocked!
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Your account has not been verified!
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