Slush, I like the new "Key Features" on the homepage. Just a few grammatical suggestions similar to the ones I've made before to help the section read better. Take whatever you'd like from here. Words I have changed or added are in red. Comments are in code.
Key features
Service lifetime & operator trust - Users have to trust
pool operators, because pools aren't cheat-proof from
the side of
the operator. mining.bitcoin.cz was the first Bitcoin mining pool
ever, has been operating consistently since December 2010,(operating since Dec/2010) and has
a long history of stable and accurate payouts.
Namecoin Merged Mining -
The pool is mining Bitcoins and Namecoins
together since October 2011. Thanks to this, users have
a much higher mining income than mining on another Bitcoin-only pool.
If you want to keep the October 2011 date, change "is mining BTC and NMC" to "has been mining BTC and NMC". It keeps the tense consistent.
Score-based reward
ing system - Pool uses
a fair distribution of rewards between members, making
the pool hop
ping-proof
. This has been which was mathematicaly proven.
The word "fair" implies a moral choice where I don't think one exists. I think the score system is better, but not everybody likes it or thinks that it is
actually fair. I would replace this point with, "The pool uses a mathematically proven reward system that benefits long-term connections while protecting
everybody from pool-hopping.", with a link to the proof and a description of what pool-hopping is and does. You can make that page as biased as you want :-)
This opinion extends to other uses of the word "fair" on the homepage.
X-Long-Polling* - This miner extension improves overall mining efficiency of connected miners by lowering stale
share ratio below 1%.
X-Roll-NTime* - Another miner extension, which improve
s network efficiency, especially for fast mining rigs.
* You need to use miner software
supportingthat supports those features. I recommend you
use poclbm miner or GUI miner
Hope this is helpful. Also on the homepage, "Why do I need bitcoin pool" should be "why do I need a bitcoin pool", and at the bottom of the page it should read, "ask
the miner's community instead