You've done well. The tips are on point although I feel #3 and #4 are a little bit out of the context of a trader. It's much more about an investor. Stuffs like lending or loans shouldn't be included. A trader should be more concerned about the market rather than platforms that offers monetary services. Aside from that, other tips are quite helpful especially for beginners. Kudos.
#4 is actually relevant if you read the whole point. Don't use money obtained from loans for trading. It's not talking about lending or anything.I don't really care about articles like that, I want to know if you have become a successful trader, how many people are good at making nonsense, but in reality they are not like what they say, speak from the results of your own experience so you can provide concrete evidence.
Yes true, easier said than done. These points are the basics principle that people with a little experience in trading will find it meh, nothing new. But it can be valuable for many newbies out there who are looking to try trading for the first time. 
