Seems that really professional people in their domain going to somewhere they don't understand.
Personally, I have prejudices as for the website, ANN, and communications. However, it might be OK that they are not proficient in marketing.
I didn't understand, for what all this?
The whitepaper is strange. It is full of generic and historical information, and information "what is blockchain"
I found only two pages about the project (+1 page about token distribution but NOT about funds allocation).
Here they are:
"
Business Scope
1. New Registration Fee: Karate athletes can register on centralized portal of
BoutsPro, after completion of basic formalities through the local
Board/Representative. They will get all information e.g. ranking, upcoming
events/tournaments as well as educational & training lessons.
2. Annual Renewal Fee: Member registration includes tournament participation
fee (1 year), educational & training support, maintenance of online records &
ranking. Membership should be renewed every year.
3. Project CuppaSchoola: BoutsPro shares the principles of vBelieve Sports,
“Nurture the Future” by infusing scholarship to our young talent filtered
through multiple programme of CuppaSchoola. We are targeting 100,000
schools in our first phase of CuppaSchoola program.
4. Event & Tournament tickets: Event & Tournament tickets will also be the
major part of revenue. Tickets can be sold online by using BoutsPro tokens.
5. Franchise/Team Sale: Along with the World Series, we also have designed
private club / team. These teams will participate in World Professional
Karate League. Franchise of team will be sold on revenue share module.
6. Advertisement: BoutsPro has designed different types of advertisement
categories e.g. online advertisement of our portals & applications,
advertisement banner on different sights of Dojos & Stadiums. The
advertisement slots will be sold online through BoutsPro tokens.
7. Sponsorship: Like other sports, we attract sponsorship for our various events.
8. Sports Insurance: We are shortly coming up with Sports Insurances. We
provide insurance to all the athletes.
9. BoutsPro.TV: BoutsPro.TV brings all faculties of entertainment industry under
one roof. It is established in collaboration with QuickMedia and Pozetta
Broadcasters of Czech Republic that primarily facilitates AKAMAI platform
for live streaming of video feeds and video-on-demand. BoutsPro.TV plans to
expand into film and television production as well as online distribution. We
plan to enter into content-production industry by 2018
10. Gaming: Based on our Karate theme & world championship, we are working
on different types of video games. We are also in a process of tie-up with
online game development companies. The purpose of these games is to provide
healthy entertainment and educate basics of karate to the common people as
well athletes. BoutsPro token will required on the different states in the game
& the players can also convert their scores/rewards in BoutsPro tokens.
11. Movie Production: Movies had played significant role to popularise Karate
worldwide. Movies like “The Karate Kid” & “Kung Fu Panda” have made
great impact on young generation and encourage them to learn karate.
“Bruce Lee”, “Jackie Chan”, “Jet Li”, “Donnie Yen”, “Michelle Yeoh”, “Kara
Hui” & “Cynthia Rothrock” are among the movie stars who played major role
to make Karate famous among common people. Understanding the power of
movies, BoutsPro decided to produce one world class movie based on Karate,
every year.
12. Dojo & Stadium: BoutsPro has planned to create World Class
Stadiums/Dojos worldwide. In our first phase we are in a process to initiate of
around 100 Stadiums & Dojos. Athletes will get the chance practice with
better opponent and get the guidance of legendry coaches & trainers.
13. BoutsPro Cards: We have designed three different types of cards. These cards
will provide access of our services (BoutsPro.TV, Games, Apps, Premium pass
for tournaments etc.) to sports lovers.
14. BoutsPro Global Schools: We have planned to establish BoutsPro Global
Schools for regular mainstream education in most innovative ways. The said
project is to be implemented in collaboration with various governments in
each continents of the World. The process is already initiated in Serbia
(Europe) and Indonesia (Asia)"
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