[ANN] [FZ] CONTEST ENDED - VOTING STARTED! Frozen Haiku Poetry (700 FZ rewards!) - page 4.

Dilapidated

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Activity: 252

Merit: 250

We stuck together
Because Frozen is coming.
To win the coinwar.

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Thanks!

trenton81

member

Activity: 70

Merit: 10

So far 8 submissions for the 5-7-5 Haiku contest.

If it stays at this count until the end of the month all get a price Cheesy

KingGoon

member

Activity: 112

Merit: 10

All these girls excited
Oooo ya know they like it
Frozen so icy, so icy
Haters don't try to fight it
All yo friends invited
Frozen so icy, so icy Cool

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qHyw6p4KksE Cool

coinmaker33

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Activity: 252

Merit: 100

Quote from: coinmaker33 on January 12, 2014, 11:48:54 PM

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Forest trees be frozen:
The six month sun cometh...
For all who read this, to this coin show devotion

Good luck team - hope you enjoyed my first ever effort at Haiku with a Frozen twist!
(not quite 7-5-7, but it rhymes!!)

Cool

Take 2: 7-5-7 version!

Forest trees be they frozen:
Six month sun shines bright...
Avast a coin is chosen.

Enjoy!

Take 3: (Did I say 5-7-5 Haiku - Doh!)

Formed from ice and men:
Light shines from a six month sun...
Reflects pure; Frozen.

trenton81

member

Activity: 70

Merit: 10

@qiuzhixin15, @viriat0: your Haiku poem is missing, you need it to take part in the contest.

Please try to stick roughly to the 5-7-5 Haiku scheme - take an example in the previous posters

viriat0

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Activity: 1008

Merit: 501

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Thanks

Beoga

legendary

Activity: 2646

Merit: 1141

The reed swinging in the wind
frozen water with leaves stilled
new coin was born

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qiuzhixin15

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Activity: 539

Merit: 250

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thx

coinmaker33

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Activity: 252

Merit: 100

FR3J96C5EjTrxwCCd13xTT4XXCBhN4eZD2

Forest trees be frozen:
The six month sun cometh...
For all who read this, to this coin show devotion

Good luck team - hope you enjoyed my first ever effort at Haiku with a Frozen twist!
(not quite 7-5-7, but it rhymes!!)

Cool

trenton81

member

Activity: 70

Merit: 10

Quote from: Snail2 on January 12, 2014, 06:44:16 PM

Unfortunately not really the 5-7-5 form but... well nothing is perfect. Right

?

Good for me, all is well

Good luck!

PS: as for your question, Snail2, count should go as a single syllable imho. Please correct me, folks

PPS: you could e.g. substitute "my" with "many" Cheesy

Snail2

legendary

Activity: 1512

Merit: 1000

Icy fingertips
make it difficult to count
My frozen coins

Unfortunately not really the 5-7-5 form but... well nothing is perfect. Right

?

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Edit: freakin english syllables... "count" is one or two syllables? Probably missed this lesson too

.

trenton81

member

Activity: 70

Merit: 10

@katsoo, I like limericks. May be it will be the next contest

@CryptoEnthusiast, too feisty or not too feisty? That's the question... ... for the voters Cheesy

I like all of the contributions so far a lot

CrytoEnthusiast

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Activity: 196

Merit: 100

Haha thanks katsoo & KoningKaas Grin

katsoo

member

Activity: 70

Merit: 10

thanks for the frozen!
Hey, I think a limerick contest is another great idea. That was how I opened my first post here at btc. Cheesy

KoningKaas

full member

Activity: 168

Merit: 100

Quote from: CrytoEnthusiast on January 12, 2014, 06:22:19 PM

Erupter fucked up
So now we're taking over
Long live Frozen Coin

Too feisty?

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1st place! Grin

katsoo

member

Activity: 70

Merit: 10

Quote from: CrytoEnthusiast on January 12, 2014, 06:22:19 PM

Erupter fucked up
So now we're taking over
Long live Frozen Coin

Too feisty?

FPWiKsxVUf7mg1pFG42V3xzZUWanB4MLLJ

i like it! Cheesy

CrytoEnthusiast

full member

Activity: 196

Merit: 100

Erupter fucked up
So now we're taking over
Long live Frozen Coin

Too feisty?

FPWiKsxVUf7mg1pFG42V3xzZUWanB4MLLJ

trenton81

member

Activity: 70

Merit: 10

Quote from: 0btc on January 12, 2014, 04:43:23 PM

perhaps it is best
to provide an example
that has been fine-tuned

You got me there

Sorry for my smartass comment, one extra FZ for wanksta11 for having to bear this

Ok guys, ignore fine-tuning. There's freedom in poetry, and so in this contest.

Best luck!

trenton

0btc

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Activity: 252

Merit: 250

0x0a.nl operator

Quote from: trenton81 on January 12, 2014, 04:29:00 PM

(*) @wanksta11, may be your Haiku needs some fine-tuning for the contest: 1st line 5 syllables: ok, 2nd line 6 syllables: one missing, 3rd line 4 syllables: one missing. :-)

perhaps it is best
to provide an example
that has been fine-tuned

(i.e., for the example "Without flowing wine" I count 5-6-3 instead of 5-7-5?)

rail233

newbie

Activity: 12

Merit: 0

Quote from: trenton81 on January 12, 2014, 04:29:00 PM

Hey all,

I just "threw some snow to unthaw" (1 FZ) to rail233 and wanksta11 (posters number 3 (*)) and 2 FZ to RJX (poster number 2)

(*) @wanksta11, may be your Haiku needs some fine-tuning for the contest: 1st line 5 syllables: ok, 2nd line 6 syllables: one missing, 3rd line 4 syllables: one missing. :-)

First poster's special donations are done now. For you all: good inspiration and good luck!

Have lots of fun!

trenton

Thanks Trenton!

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