You had me at single ledger approach..... But, seeing as how making a decision based on one clever line of text would be irresponsible at best. I took a deeper look into this, overly technical, white paper. It's great to be thorough. My opinion, for what it's worth, is you should stay away from repetitive descriptions and make sure your investors don't need Academic knowledge in Fin-tech. I read white papers every day. It's part of my job. I find it a more enjoyable experience when I want to read through the white paper again, not when I have to, to understand it.
I agree. It is really hard to understand the technical aspects as an non technical orientated person. That's maybe a problem for me (and probably a lot of other ppl) which could be interested in the project topic but then don't understand it enough and will go on to the next project, because they then know what they invest in.
You are right, the whitepaper is quite technical and for someone, like me, who has no knowledge about the topic its pretty hard to understand. But I do understand that it can be a fine line between a too technical and a oversimplified whitepaper. That's where such a thread like this comes into place, where we can ask and the developers can do an ELI5 for people like me
ico's where i read it: and i'm like wth? not because i can't understand but because of wtf why or just lol
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