I'm love the quality of the voice recording, but the copy/script that was used is BAD English. It's a bit of a shame because the video is otherwise REALLY good. I can help with this, though -- I can proofread/edit your script. I can also record a new voiceover if needed (I'm a pro actor as well).
I think we are in the stage when this could be a
group effort, Ola already provided a voice over, Psybits agreed to use his sentences and QBTC sent the logos. Here is
my script, lets the big
group grammar correction fight begins
This video will be in TVs, Conferences, it will probably have influence on millions of people deciding if they want to join Nxt (and I received only 6K Nxt for the video (for now), while lynnx has 400k, although he posted his video after the deadline as well)
My brand new profesionally looking introducing video for the Nxt hompage. It took me 6 days and long nights (one day up to 7 AM). If you think the video deserves any bounties, donations or thank you gifts for my effort, then my Nxt is:
15003961341330858247
http://wideo.co/view/1504591387756502643-nxt-generation-of-cryptocurrencylow quality:
http://youtu.be/ktMGC-Nq9ZoScenario for corrections:1. What is Next?
2. In past you could barter, pay by gold or paper money, such as American Dollar. Recently people started to use digital currency called Bitcoin. But it was too slowly, unsecure and needed too much of the computer power. After Bitcoin and his clones experienced some ups and downs, the second generation cryptocurrency was born. Fast, secure and green Nxt.
3. Nxt focuses on decentralization. All transactions and wallets are decentralized and kept on the network. With decentralized peer to peer exchanges you don’t have to pay high fees to the providers. Decentralized DNS improves the security and protects you from censorship. Alias is a very cool function that brings us to the whole new level. Don’t be just a number! Welcome to the 2014!
4. Never forget, that Nxt is brand new software. This is no fork of Bitcoin!
5. The initial Nxt distribution process was completely fair and very public. People were advised to send Bitcoin to the genesis address in exchange for NXT. All NXT coins were sold to the original stakeholders. Now they are selling, donating or using Nxt to pay for work on the coin. 30% of Nxt money has changed the owner after three weeks. Do you know, only 22% of all existing Bitcoins have been transferred in 4 years of Bitcoin existence?
6. As a first cryptocurrency of the second generation, Nxt has a lot to provide. There is no such thing as Bitcoin mining in Nxt. The system of next mining is very green in power consumption, since Proof of Stake mechanism doesn’t require massive amounts of hashing power. Selfish proof of work mining problem was finally solved. The price of NXT will never be affected by miners! Users gain transaction fees for maintaining the next network. The more coins you have, the more blocks you will generate, but the amount you get per block is dependent on the transaction fees included in the block. Remember: Everyone gets the same return of investment.
7. Nxt’s code supports colored coins, - a way to designate specific coins - and tie them to physical property. How it works? You send your currency to the gateway. The gateway issues the asset on the next network via colored coins. That asset is then transferable on Nxt. All kinds of virtual currencies or other commodities will be able to be traded via the Nxt network!
8. There will also be many socializing features, not only an Alias. You will be able to chat and send messages to other users – always via peer to peer connections. Because of no central leadership, people will be able to vote about some important events, such as releasing the whole source code to the public.
9. Nxt brings a new revolution for crypto currency. Next generation of crypto currency. Now we will have a currency and infrastructure which is based on a 100% original code base, 100% green, accessible to anyone on the planet, truly secure, and fast.
First sent corrections:
BitcoinForumator:
At 0:10 the narrator says: "...called Bitcoin, but it was too SLOWLY..."
It should be "...called Bitcoin, but it was too SLOW..."
+ someone mentioned Bitcoin is "it" and not "he"
rickyjames:
there are several places where the wording is not quite what a native English speaker would say. I would be happy to work with you if you wish to polish your film and make it closer to perfect.
