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well to be frank with you, we seen a lot of your kind of business in the market lately who have nothing to offer and going by the doc you referred to as a white paper will not fetch you anything good. So if you want to run a project first try to have a good plan

Hi, Thank you for your feedback. What technical details would you like to know?

Hi,
If you click on the link in my first post and not the link from the quoted post, you will see that I have made some changes to the whitepaper in order to clarify things. I subcontracted a Tron Dapp developer, CodeXpert, to build my Dapp; so I guess you could call them my team. Thank you for your feedback.

My opinion is that icos are becoming outdated and uninterested primarily because of the multiplicity of scam projects which has led to unprecedented loss of investment on the part of the investing public. Nonetheless I wish you luck on the move you have decided to take

it's hard to call it a whitepapper. There are no details about the project. If you really wanna implement the project, I advise you to describe your project in more detail from the technical side.

It seems like OP just wanted to take advantage of tron platform advantage because there is very less tron based project and he just try to take advantages . We have seen this kind of greedy scammers . Whrrr is your team , what solution you are trying to solve nothing is clear.

Hahaha, nice one, this is how many project team behave and I don't know why people still invest in their project, the best way to do this kind of thing is to get a professional to write the whitepaper if you are not good in English, because from the look of things, you don't have funds to pay a whitepaper writer to create a professional whitepaper for you, so am just wondering where you will be able to get developers who will work on the project for you for free, because I don't think you are also ready to hire a developer who is going to work on the project.

Great feedback! I'll try my best to clarify...

1) When you deposit your funds:

1% will go to the investor's dividend pool. If you deposit 100 coins, the dividend pool will receive 1 coin.
1% will to the one who referred you to the program.
1% will go to Marketing.
and 1% will go to the developer.
You, as the investor, will receive a credited balance of 96% of the deposit and will begin accumulating dividends. In 24 hours, the total amount of the accumulated dividends will be 1% of the credited balance; 0.96 coins. If you withdraw your credited balance, the dividends will stop accumulating.

2) What makes this project unique are 2 things:
    1- the algorithm will invest the same amount that is credited to the investor and the dividends from the algorithm's investment will go back to the dividend pool
    2- you can withdraw your credited balance anytime you wish

3) I understand that the word "poverty" is very broad. My intent and overall objective is to offer an investment opportunity to people with limited financial resources. For the "averge Joe," earning an additional $10.00 to $50.00 a day, or more, will make a huge impact & increase their capacity to provide for their families.

4) Going on Kickstarter never crossed my mind. I have never used them so I am not familiar with how they work.

I hope these additional details are helpful.

Hey man. I'm always up for anything - so I gave it a read and here's what I thought.

Explain it like I'm five years old: I'm neither a mathematician or a statistician. You need to fully explain what's happening with my funds, and provide me with a working in depth example - not the basic one you gave
You need to be unique: What differentiates you from the thousands of other projects that have tried the exact same thing and failed? If your answer begins with: "the only difference" then I'm out.
Whitepaper is far too short: What sort of poverty are you trying to alleviate? Anything in particular? The world is so full of nasty shit these days, just saying "poverty" isn't going to cut it
Why aren't you on Kickstarter? If you can adequately explain to your audience how you couldn't possibly copy this project and put it on kickstarter using real-world money then you're probably onto a winner. Why is crypto integral to this project?

I could think of a few more but I think these need addressing first!

Hope that helps

Agreed

Icos are becoming dead wood no thanks to multiplicity of scam projects . Would mire icos do any good only time shall tell

Thank you for your feedback. The one thing that will differentiate my project from all the others is that you'll be able to withdraw your investment at any time almost instantly with the smart contract. No other projects that I know of has this feature. And since anyone can see the amount of funds in the contract on the blockchain, the individual can choose whether to invest or not.

There were thousands of similar projects and they all led to one thing - the last investors are losing their money. All this is the Ponzi Scheme. I am categorically against this kind of smart contracts and strongly disapprove of your project. People like you kill the trust of honest people in cryptocurrencies.

Interesting ... Yes, I am for real. I've been involved in crypto since 2013 so I am aware of the losing interest in ICOs. I can assure you this is not a scam. Had you thoroughly read the whitepaper, you would have noticed some details like:

1) All transactions will be made via TronLink smart contract, which means no human interactions.
2) The contract balance can be seen on the blockchain.
3) The value in purchasing the coins means that the investors will be able to stake the coins on the website immediately for a 1% daily return or trade them on an exchange after the ICO period.
4) The algorithm will invest the same amount that is credited to the investors, with the dividends from the algorithm's investment going back to the dividend pool.
5) The dividends will accumulate immediately, and will update every second and can be withdrawn as soon the accumulation of one.
6) The investor can withdraw the investment at any time.

Yes, this my first whitepaper. I contracted a Tron Dapp developer, CodeXpert, to build my Dapp, so I guess you could say that they are my team; other than that, it's just me. Once the Dapp is up and running, everything will be automated by the algorithm.

I too, have been the victim of many scams, so I wanted to create something that has all the qualities I was looking for. Before I release the final payment to the developer and launch the product, I want to get some feedback from the community.

Thank you for taking the time to read my whitepaper and for your feedback. It was very helpful.

Are you what for real? Are you not following what is going on in the crypto industry to see how investors are losing serious interest in ICO projects because of scam going on, and you call this a whitepaper that doesn’t carry much detail any investors can work with or use to research if your project is real of scam.

You have not even release your project, its already discouraging seeing your whitepaper, no team, no tangible breakdown of what project is all about and the real benefit of it to the community, I can see you are a newbie and it seems you still have to learn more on how things works in this industry, work better on your product please.

Hi,

I'll be releasing a new Tron Dapp/ICO soon, but before I release it, i'm hoping to get some feedback. Here is the whitepaper https://docs.google.com/document/d/1YVgfA6u9WGS1UgsfIirIrwbsokkBGob4R1f6uu9tX2E/edit?usp=sharing
To get an idea of what the website will look like, please click here https://bankroll.network/daily.html?ref=TNcoTjShgGWVVxLdXG14xkCUcHWVEnn5Di Note: this is a referral link. You don't have to invest in this.Thanks in advance!