Topic: Paying BTC for Each Grammar Correction Used | Only takes Seconds, easy BTC! - page 2. (Read 1599 times)

What I meant was, for example, the following:

14)"This is because in this case harming one person is just a side effect of switching the trolley in the other direction"
"because in this case harming" -> "because, in this case, harming"

The first comma is erroneous. It should simply be "...because in this case, harming..."

There are many more cases throughout the page, as well.

I only use corrections that are actual errors, better to read, and an actual improvement to the article. Payments are for each correction that is used

I just want to point out that I've seen multiple "corrections" here that are actually incorrect. How are you handling those?

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http://www.whyfuture.com/single-post/2016/11/06/The-Blueprints-towards-the-Development-of-Good-Artificial-Intelligence

1) "As technology is advancing the popularity of Artificial Intelligence is increasing"
"advancing the" -> "advancing, the"

2)  "AI can be a positive or negative outcome"
"or" -> "as well as a"

3) "A blueprint to consider is, learning AI can be harmed from bad teachers, for example Microsoft Tay of traits of prejudice, racist, unjustness, etc. Was a learned characteristic."
Rewrite -> A blueprint to consider is that the learning process of an AI can be harmed by bad teachers. For example, Microsoft Tay had traits of prejudice, racism, unjustness, etc. which are characteristics that it learned.

4) "Microsoft AI Tay had bad teachers that distorted and worsen the outcome of Tay"
"worsen" -> "worsened"

5) "An closed system is something to consider, where the AI is taught first."
"An" -> "A"
Rewrite -> "Something to consider is a closed system where the AI is taught first"

6) "The second blueprint we should consider is looking into how human behavior develops at a young age, learning right from wrong, what's socially acceptable"
"," -> "and"

7) "Reinforcing the best of humanity into the AI, and circumventing indulge towards self-ego, self-respect, and favoring its personal rewards at the cost of others."
"indulge" -> "indulgence"
"." -> "is a good way to teach the AI what is right

"Like the North Korean leader that isn't on behalf of the people, but the people are on behalf of himself for example"
Rewrite -> "We can take the North Korean leader for example, who isn't on behalf of the people, but the people are on behalf of him"

9) "You need to choose for the most ethical choice"
"choose for" -> "select" OR "choose"

10) "The different response is seen due to a moral distinction between the two situations."
"response is" -> "responses are"

11) "The interesting part is, how a psychopath answer can differ from a non-psychopath"
"psychopath" -> "psychopath's"
"non-psychopath" -> "non-psychopath's"

12)"One important distinction between the two above-mentioned situations is the state of intentions involve."
"involve" -> "involved"

13)"In the first situation sacrificing a life of a single person to save five people is justified to some extent"
"first situation" -> "first situation,"

14)"This is because in this case harming one person is just a side effect of switching the trolley in the other direction"
"because in this case harming" -> "because, in this case, harming"

15)"While in the second case the harming the fat person is intentional to saving the five people"
"second case the harming" -> "second case, harming "

16)"So in the second case you intend to kill a person to save five people"
"So in the second case you" -> "So, in the second case, you"

17) "Here you intend to pursue an action which has bad side effects. But at the same time intentionally doing harm is bad."
Rewrite -> "Here, you intend to pursue an action which has bad side effects, but, at the same time, you know that intentionally doing harm is bad"

This is a bit more involved than what I usually do. If you come up with more articles, let me know. I'm a professional editor/proofreader (who does this for large clients). That said, I track changes in Word. It would take far too much time for me to go through here and write a sentence with every single correction made.

 In this case, A one-dimensional AI would tally John actions as negative actions, like being violent and vulgar.

 In this case, a one-dimensional AI would tally John's actions as negative actions, like being violent and vulgar.

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This is the path to a utopian world of peace, love, and harmony; fictional can become a reality. -> This is the path to a utopian world of peace, love, and harmony; fiction can become a reality.

Evolution is a slow process in which changes can take eons to occur. -> Evolution is a slow process in which change can take eons to occur.

Still on the 41st square, it contains a mountainous 1 trillion grains of rice pile. -> Still, on the 41st square, it contains a mountainous 1 trillion grains of rice.

Go also allows the player more freedom for movement, on any of the 361 possible spots to play on the first turn, then 360 for second turn. -> Go also allows the player more freedom for movement, on any of the 361 possible spots to play on the first turn, then 360 for the second turn.

There is nothing magical about the human brain, it is an extremely sophisticated biological machine (so to say) that is capable of adapting to environment, capable of creativity, awareness, analyzation, and much more. -> There is nothing magical about the human brain; it is an extremely sophisticated biological machine (so to say) that is capable of adapting to the environment, capable of creativity, awareness, analyzation, and much more.

Would the SI create a dystopian or uptoia world? -> Would the SI create a dystopian or utopian world?

Or did we mess up and are destined to a dystopian world? -> Or did we mess up and are now destined to a dystopian world?

It has a arbitrary goal like to create more paper clips, turning the planet, solar system into a paper clip factory (Worst outcome for humanity) -> It has an arbitrary goal like to create more paper clips, turning the planet, solar system into a paper clip factory (Worst outcome for humanity)

If we teach it good core values and have it build an inner personal web like a personal shield/defense against learning outside bad exposure before exposing it to everything else. We can maximize our chances on a better outcome than to how Tay became from Microsoft. -> If we teach it good core values and have it build an inner personal web like a personal shield/defense against learning outside bad exposure before exposing it to everything else, We can maximize our chances on a better outcome than to how Tay became from Microsoft.

This Being would be unstoppable to the end of time. -> This being would be unstoppable until the end of time.

It's because of this, the SI should value humans more than people would to ants/mouses regardless of the difference of gap -> It's because of this; the SI should value humans more than people would to ants/mouses regardless of the difference of gap.

Below the human brain level, like a cat, wouldn't even grasp the concept of an intelligence staircase/n+1 let alone would see everyone is like itself. -> Below the human brain level, like a cat, wouldn't even grasp the concept of an intelligence staircase/n+1, let alone would see everyone is like itself.

We want someone that works on behalf of humanity, improves our lives, and is on our team. -> We want someone that works on behalf of humanity, improves our life, and is on our team.

Having paradise and our problems solved does sound good. -> Living in paradise with our problems solved does sound good.

Rewrites:

SI decides it instead of helping us, rather be treated highly with self-pride, declaring it is God with its superior power like the north korea leader. -> SI decides that instead of helping us, instead of asking to be treated highly, it declares that it is God with its superior power, much like Kim Jong-un, North Korea's leader.

Bob Plugs an USB drive into the computer to transfer information to the computer. -> Bob plugs a USB drive into the computer to transfer data.

The only difference is elements, we as a carbon-based life; it would be composed of different elements. -> The only difference is our element structure. We are a carbon-based species, while the SI would be composed of different elements.

Take the below speculation with light since I only have human intelligence to look at how it could even do it, it's there just to serve as a purpose to how it might outthink this situation. -> Take the speculation below lightly, since I only have human intelligence to look at how it could even do it. It is there to serve a purpose as to how it might outthink this situation.

Carefulness to avoid putting it into the wrong hands and have it learn from the internet public, are traits and concerns everyone cannot have and hence, it's best to have it on the side teaching it core human values like positive attributes and having it mature in this way. Since It's best to avoid an outcome like Microsoft Tay as Tay became racist, genocidal, nazi-loving, prejudice, inconsiderate, unempathetic, unloving, etc. -> We should be careful to avoid putting the AI into the wrong hands and having it learn from the public domain of the internet. There are traits and concerns everyone cannot have, therefore, it is best to have the AI on the side, teaching it core human values like positive attributes and having it mature this way. One outcome that averts this is Microsoft's Tay, as Tay became a racist, nazi-loving, inconsiderate AI, among other negative traits.

A truly altruistic person is a person that has a strong sense of empathy. In order to get a sense of satisfaction from helping someone, you need to have an emotional connection to that person and more importantly that person's own emotions. -> A truly altruistic person is an individual that has a strong sense of empathy. In order to get a sense of satisfaction from helping someone, you need to have an emotional connection to that person. More importantly, you need a connect to that person's own emotions.

Like human looking robots that show scary appearances like its teeth and out to kill us. -> Pop culture portrayals of AI usually look human, although they carry scary appearances and are always portrayed as out to kill us.

Like a ferry and a captain who cares for the safety of his passengers, one whose gets us to our destination. -> A captain is someone who cares for the safety of his ferry and passengers, one who gets us to our destination.

1. Then, what about An AI-Box, never give it internet access or anything it needs to achieve the above?

Rewriting the sentence: Then what about an AI-Box? To never give it Internet access or anything it needs to achieve the above?

2. Perhaps a bit more clever thinking than before

3. Speculation means that it would learn how to master nano-technologies, self-replication, and manipulate emails and data between scientists. This would happen without them knowing they are engineering a self-replicating nanorobot. AI, through the entire human race of knowledge, can quickly learn to spread these nanorobots, potentially to everyone in the world, controlling us, or anything it needs, to finally create a von-Neumann probes in space for self-replication and expansion outwards, using materials from planets, asteroids, and a replicating solar panel, robots for example.

4. This Being would be unstoppable till the end of time.


5.  For example, the modern smartphone, compared to the ENIAC, provides more computing power and is thousands of times smaller.

Rewriting the sentence:  For example, comparing the modern smartphone to the ENIAC, the former provides more computing power and is thousand times smaller.

6.  Add a period at the end of the following sentences:

i. What was once considered fictional can become reality.
ii. While typical brute forcing can be used on chess, trying Deep Blue's method of calculation manually on Go would take much longer than the entirety of the universe’s existence.
iii. SI doesn't have common sense and isn't alike to a human. It has a arbitrary goal like to create more paper clips, turning the planet, solar system into a paper clip factory (Worst outcome for humanity).
iv. SI sees us as insignificant and ignores us (providing we stay out of its way).


7. Reading this will give you a better understanding of linear thinking and exponential thinking

8.   Below is part of the TOS Bridge, first aired in 1966 known for its projection of the 23rd century, using buttons and crude computer displays of light indicators.

Rewriting the sentence: Below is part of the TOS Bridge. It was first aired in 1966 and is known for its projection of the 23rd century. It uses buttons and crude computer displays of light indicators.

9. Furthermore, the Internet and the World Wide Web, which have not even been conceptualized, are now connecting the world together.

10. This is how we generally think about the future which, in reality, is far being true.

11.  It's unknown how far up the AI can go before it reaches universal limits because once the AI has the ability to redesign, re-engineer, rebuild, evolve, and expand itself, then it would become a superconscious highly-intelligent being.

12. In this age of collaboration, we are given opportunities to design various technologies, to learn and understand our world and to share ideas to make it a better place, thus, explaining the increasing the number of emerging technologies.

13. Contrary to how evolution has taken billions of years to evolve us, self-improving AI would transcend it in every imaginable possibleway.


14. Bullies are bad people that who like power controlling and enforcing their ways views upon other people.

15. One who can be on behalf of people, can also be that the people are on behalf of itself.

Rewriting the sentence: One who can act on behalf of people, can also have the people act on behalf of himself.


16. A good SI should be a team player and an augmenter.

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Pick any one of these articles:

1) http://www.whyfuture.com/single-post/2016/11/06/The-Blueprints-towards-the-Development-of-Good-Artificial-Intelligence
2) http://www.whyfuture.com/single-post/2016/07/01/The-future-of-Artificial-Intelligence-Ethics-on-the-Road-to-Superintelligence
3) http://www.whyfuture.com/single-post/2016/12/02/The-Predestination-of-Artificial-Intelligence-and-the-Powerful-Future
4) http://www.whyfuture.com/single-post/2017/01/20/Leading-the-Path-of-Artificial-Intelligence-to-the-Road-of-Altruism

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