I'm happy about you guys pointing out my bad points.
And i'm not 15 to get upset about it. Gives me advice where i have to work on.
In 21st century if you haven't noticed age isn't what makes difference, there is many young kids who achieved big thinks, look at Vitalik Buterin himself, made ethereum at what age ?
Yes, i'm not pure english , I'm from eastern europe.
Yes , i don't have any investors, or background money, to hire good team. All job i've done so far by making token, and website was my own initiative.
I'm not asking for 50 million on pre-sale, i was expecting it wont even reach 10% out of it, once money start coming in, team would have been hired, and work would start without delay, no doubts on that. I know loads of 40+ year olds make better looking sites and team, and scam people, while in my case, i'm looking for project to run.
And there was whitepaper, maybe not as good as you all ''professionals'' expected, but there is.
You can't call it a 'not a scam' while falsely marketing your project?
if 3/4 of your team
isn't actually part of your team, yet you claim they are, that's false marketing and misdirecting investors.
And! In all honesty, it doesn't matter if you're from eastern Europe, or anywhere else -
if you actually want to collect money from people, by marketing your site in english, you really need to either teach yourself english, or pay someone, or
actually team up with people who knows proper english.
I didn't mean to really bash your idea as much as I did, but you obviously know you didn't have your team, yet you claimed you did.
If you're honest about it, and realistic with your expectations, and truly have a project idea - I'm certain that you could collect some money.
Right now however, I can't see why anyone would give their money to you.
Also, what's the actual idea?
"Ultimately, FSMN’s network will expand to all online providers in any industry or business sector that has online payment capabilities"
Why does this require it's own Ethereum token? It's way too many projects today that exists without actual reason to - just a cash grab.
To summarize, I think you should:Fix language
Invest in a proper site - wordpress is great, but doesn't give a very professional impression(+ loads super slow, too many bad plugins?)
Be transparent - don't pretend to have a team if you don't
Be realistic, don't put a $50m cap if all you have is a wordpress site and a one man team with broken english(not meaning to be rude, just honest!)
Adress:Who will make this project a reality? You alone? Do you have any experience in the field?
Explain how your project will come alive, your whitepaper isn't really explaining any technical aspects
Consider renaming it - really sounds like a scam just by the name
Explain why your project has reason to exist.
I can't find any of those ICO ratings on their actual site. Another lie?
You realise this is a public thread and anyone googling this might very well find this and see that all you got is a wordpress site and that's about it?
Be truthful, transparent and such - you might get some people to invest in it
if it's a good idea.
You're not going to get anywhere really if 80% of your site is made up content.
And what about this:
"2 000 000 000 FSMN on private sale, all unsold
tokens will be burned."
"2 000 000 000 FSMN all unsold
tokens will be burned"
<- no dot"Total coins at crowdsale 4 000 000 000 , all unsold
coins will be burned."
<- space after commaProof read!