Good piece of work and nice to see more writers joining this trade <3.
I would recommend you get some specificity into your analysis at times. Let me give you an example;
"The DeepOnion project itself is nascent, and I believe that it has a very bright future. Not only is there a tremendous need for increased privacy in out transactions, but this project is also tackling other issues that some of the first generation cryptocurrencies are struggling to deal with."
If you can explore and go into a bit more depth why there is a need for increased privacy in transactions, that would give more substance to the piece. Such as the recent ban/crackdown on ICOs and Cryptocurrencies in general in China, that gives a need for those that want to be in cryptocurrency, for their transactions to be as anonymous as possible. The decentralization and ownership of ones own finances for instance could also be a point to make that could be explored in depth. You don't need to have too many examples, but one or two makes the pieces better.
Again mate, good work and good contribution to the community. And very happy to see more and more are taking up writing! I love writing myself.