Hello devs, hello everyone,
I just read the initial white paper, which is currently under revision.
First of all, congratulations. I know, that it is quite some effort to put something like this together. However, as many already mentioned, there are a few points, which could be improved. When looking at the original ETH whitepaper (
https://github.com/ethereum/wiki/wiki/White-Paper), you see, that there are 92 revision. Hence, something like this is also a work in progress.
Just a few points:
- Pictures: If you use pictures, one should give credit, from where you got them. Furthermore, many pictures did not contribute to the content of the white paper. Even thought, this looks nice, I would rather drop them and add more figures or tables, which will add additional information to the paper.
- Add references, if you cite or reference to a statement, it is good to give the source.
- Add technical aspects: As there are planned features such as coin swap, masternodes or anonymity, I would add more detailed technical descriptions to the paper, if possible.
- A minor thing, but I would use a more "serious" font like Times New Roman.
Furthermore, there seems to be small mistake:
"The target is to ensure that there are around 50,000 masternodes in the system within one year after the third phase is launched."
As a masternode requires 1000 coins and the maximum coin supply will be only 4,2 million coins, this is not possible (50,000*1000=50 million).
Looking forward to the revision. Kind regards,
Halcyon D.
That's good and constructive post and idea, your'e right Ethereum has 92 revisions on WP, Everything can be fixed as long as dev and team attempt to fix it.
Price steady in $0.6 over 24 hours, I think community doing well with it, no super dump so far and I believe it wouldn't happen even in dev and team side.
Hope the 2nd rev of WP will bring the ETHD to better in project, price and community.
