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Quote from: TheBitMan on July 13, 2011, 01:58:25 PM

Your right, from now on I will focus on one audience at a time.

Random: Young entrepreneur, take that advice to some of the other projects you have and how you present them to people. You should make a project for yourself that would challenge you to focus that one project to a very specific and targeted group just to test yourself.

Basically, you have a person who likes Bitcoins. And you have a Male, 15-24, "Gamer", American, who likes Bitcoin. Before trying to find the middle ground with that, make a project where you focus on trying to convert that 15-24 American Gamer Dude into Bitcoin. Then do one for the general public.

Sorry to pop all this crap in this thread, but Jaime Frontero is right, and past this thread I see how many sites you have, and I think you should keep doing what you are doing but fine tune and focus (so it does apply to this commercial but a lot of the stuff you do).

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You must skip the.

They only way for bitcoin to succeed.

It makes it sound like bitcoin is a really bad investment.

Tell people why bitcoin is for them.

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Your right, from now on I will focus on one audience at a time.

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Quote from: TheBitMan on July 13, 2011, 01:45:45 PM

"is there any way to push the transaction cost benefits?"

Sorry I don't understand?

the ad appears geared towards speculators in the 'multiplying in price' segment. yet overall, it seems more appropriate for merchants - and merchants hate transaction costs with a deep and burning passion.

maybe what i mean is that the ad tries to do too much. decide on a market segment you want to address (merchants, buyers, speculators, savers, international payments, etc.), and deal with that one segment exclusively. and then look at placement.

the overall design of the ad is attractive and effective - but you need individual ads for specific market segments. and frankly, i think the speculation segment of the market has been pretty saturated.

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Quote from: GeniuSxBoY on July 13, 2011, 01:47:37 PM

King Critical here.

The wording wasn't so great.

Made it feel like the future of Bitcoin was resting on my shoulders.

I don't want to take on that responsibility.

I'd rather "be a part of history" instead of "making history single handedly"

part of history is good, I will add that next time.

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Quote from: BitcoinPorn on July 13, 2011, 01:46:30 PM

Quote from: TheBitMan on July 13, 2011, 01:37:30 PM

I just don't want to use a copyrighted music. But some copyrighted "epic" music would sound great.

http://lmgtfy.com/?q=royalty+free+epic+music :p

lol gotcha

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Quote from: Jaime Frontero on July 13, 2011, 01:40:48 PM

the 'multiplying in price' message seems a bit shaky. is there any way to push the transaction cost benefits?

I agree the 'multiplying in price' thing is not great - especially combined with the statement that
'the only way bitcoin can succeed is if YOU accept it'

It sounds pleading.. and well.. 'pyramid scheme desperate for new blood' springs to mind!

The speed seemed ok.

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King Critical here.

The wording wasn't so great.

Made it feel like the future of Bitcoin was resting on my shoulders.

I don't want to take on that responsibility.

I'd rather "be a part of history" instead of "making history single handedly"

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Quote from: TheBitMan on July 13, 2011, 01:37:30 PM

I just don't want to use a copyrighted music. But some copyrighted "epic" music would sound great.

http://lmgtfy.com/?q=royalty+free+epic+music :p

TheBitMan

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"is there any way to push the transaction cost benefits?"

Sorry I don't understand?

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yeah, the end is cut off.

i'm older, and the text speed seemed fine.

i agree with BitcoinPorn that the silence worked, somewhat - but i don't think a full-length soundtrack would work, either. i'd prolly put a loud chord at the beginning to get people to look, tapering off the volume over four-six more chords to silence. grab 'em and make 'em read.

the 'multiplying in price' message seems a bit shaky. is there any way to push the transaction cost benefits?

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I just don't want to use a copyrighted music. But some copyrighted "epic" music would sound great.

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Quote from: BitcoinPorn on July 13, 2011, 01:29:33 PM

Shit turned out really good. The end seems cut off a little bit. Text is a lil speedy I think for maybe an older viewer, but not enough to matter. And of course some audio, even though in a weird way I liked how that was silent.

Exactly, a bit slower and some sound would make it pretty good.

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Shit turned out really good. The end seems cut off a little bit. Text is a lil speedy I think for maybe an older viewer, but not enough to matter. And of course some audio, even though in a weird way I liked how that was silent.

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I am open to any new ideas please post any suggestions for future ones.

Here are the current ones

Travelers: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zuyTKNAIzGU

Merchants: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HJi5_V_RrXc

More coming soon!

I make these Bitcoin Commercials for free so if you don't mind..drop me a tip!

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