Mike, I would be happy to update the information about your application how ever you see best.
YES - I was thinking of doing exactly the same thing, with one minor twist: Your image would be the bottom half of the page. The top would be a unique Bitcoin "Banknote" (voucher). So in other words this would be produced by a special version of the generator that prints one unique note and the instructions into a single page (or you could just run the paper through the printer twice, once for the instructions, once for the note). The instructions, of course, would say "cut this out and put it in your wallet, now YOU have a Bitcoin address, and can start accepting bitcoins right now!"...
Rewording: "Paper notes are NOT the safest way to transfer BitCoins because anyone with access to the private key can access the funds." ----> "If this note was given to you by someone else, remember the private spending key is in plain sight, so anyone else who could have a copy of it can irreversibly take your funds. To stay safe, send the funds into another Bitcoin wallet, or to a new note you printed yourself from DontTreadOnMeme.com, and never send large amounts of Bitcoins to addresses on notes that you didn't print yourself." (intended effect: it's less scary, it's more educational, and less of a "warning this isn't safe")
Spellchecks: recieve -> recieve, inport -> import.
Correction: on blockchain.info, when you import notes, they are available immediately, not almost immediately.
Suggestion: send people to BitAddress.org if they want to print new notes, rather than bitcointalk.org.
Finally... your grey background is going to cost you a lot in toner, but the freedom to do so is, as you know, yours!