I'd prefer not to have the reviews independent as there is a potential for abuse there. As an example: say that one day I have a falling out with MultiBit (they are great guys btw
), and so I try to show them in a bad light. Such a situation is not good for anybody.
Best to find a situation which is amicable to everybody. I thought your descriptions were better written than mine for the average user, but ThomasV takes issue with some of the modifications. Fine, I can understand. Lets find those small differences and create something the antagonistic reviewer (me and you in this specific example) and the submitter (ThomasV) both agree on.
Original text:
Electrum is a client that was designed to simplify the use of Bitcoin. Electrum does not download the blockchain and startup times are instant which it does by pooling remote blockchain servers. You do not need to perform regular backups of your wallet as your wallet can be recovered from a secret passphrase which you can memorize or write on a piece of paper.
Newer text:
Electrum's focus is speed, with low resource usage and making wallet backups easy. It operates in conjunction with remote servers that handle the most complicated parts of the Bitcoin system, which is why it's fast. However, by running this client you don't contribute your computers resources to the core network, and the remote servers that help give it good performance have the ability to see all your transactions and tie them together. Whilst you need provide no personal information to use Electrum (as is true for all Bitcoin apps), this means the privacy level is lower than for other clients. Merchants are recommended to use or other p2p clients. Electrum is not quite user friendly yet, making it more suited for tech-saavy individuals currently.
Well I think we can agree that the opening line is more concise and much better:
Electrum's focus is speed, with low resource usage and making wallet backups easy.
Second sentences can both be merged perhaps:
Electrum's focus is speed, with low resource usage and making wallet backups easy. Electrum does not download the blockchain and startup times are instant because it operates in conjunction with remote servers that handle the most complicated parts of the Bitcoin system.
The criticism is good but maybe a bit long, so lets include that but shorten it:
Electrum's focus is speed, with low resource usage and making wallet backups easy. Electrum does not download the blockchain and startup times are instant because it operates in conjunction with remote servers that handle the most complicated parts of the Bitcoin system. However, Electrum clients don't contribute resources to the core network, instead relying on high performance servers. These servers have the ability to infer information about your payment history, meaning the privacy level is lower than for conventional clients. This is a trade-off of the Electrum style technology. But there are benefits too; you do not need to perform regular backups of your wallet as your wallet can be recovered from a secret passphrase which you can memorize or write on a piece of paper. Electrum is not quite user friendly yet, making it more suited for tech-saavy individuals currently, but development is active in tackling those challenges.