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Topic: The Emma Meme: SEMANTIC ISSUES NEEDS RESOLVING ~ Please Help! - page 3. (Read 13317 times)

legendary
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Satoshi Nakamoto, faceless, extremely anonymous, perhaps shy, with an unknown home of abounding alacrity, advocated to pulverize all of the worst shortcomings of Fiat; and had endured uncountable years on the Internet, intending very much to replace and destroy centralization.

Do we believe that it was Satoshi's intent to destroy(?) centralization or centralized banking?

Is the following accurate? (jumping ahead)

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Satoshi Nakamoto, faceless, notably anonymous, perhaps shy, with an unknown home of abounding alacrity, advocated to void all the worst shortcomings of fiat currency; and endured uncountable years on the Internet(s) intending, most likely, to replace and liquidate centralized banking.

Don't worry too much of how the resulting paragraph above was generated via one word at time, but concentrate on the final 40-word-count paragraph being accurate. Once the task is completed, I'll be able to outline how we achieved the final result.
legendary
Activity: 1918
Merit: 1570
Bitcoin: An Idea Worth Spending
Thanks for the quick save.  Grin


Satoshi Nakamoto, faceless, extremely anonymous, perhaps shy, with an unknown home of abounding alacrity, advocated to pulverize all of the worst shortcomings of Fiat; and had endured uncountable years on the Internets, intending very much to replace and vaporize centralization.

Should Fiat be capitalized and should quotation marks be used?

And if we eliminated of in "all of the worst", what and where should a new word be placed?

Does the resulting paragraph so far personify Satoshi Nakamoto in a factual light?

~Bruno~
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Satoshi Nakamoto, faceless, extremely anonymous, perhaps shy, with an unknown home of abounding alacrity, advocated to pulverize all of the worst shortcomings of Fiat; and had endured uncountable years on the Internet, intending very much to replace and destroy centralization.
legendary
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Away on an extended break
Thanks for the quick save.  Grin


Satoshi Nakamoto, faceless, extremely anonymous, perhaps shy, with an unknown home of abounding alacrity, advocated to pulverize all of the worst shortcomings of Fiat; and had endured uncountable years on the Internets, intending very much to replace and vaporize centralization.
legendary
Activity: 1918
Merit: 1570
Bitcoin: An Idea Worth Spending
Satoshi Nakamoto, faceless, extremely anonymous, perhaps shy, with an unknown home of abounding alacrity, advocated to pulverize every of the worst shortcomings of Fiat; and had endured for many years on the Internets, intending very much to replace and vaporize banknotes.

grammar fail
Brain fart.  Wink
It's 1.22 AM here, but it might be due the test I'm studying for.

I already fixed it.

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Satoshi Nakamoto, faceless, extremely anonymous, perhaps shy, with an unknown home of abounding alacrity, advocated to pulverize all of the worst shortcomings of Fiat; and had endured many years on the Internets, intending very much to replace and vaporize centralization.

How close are we into getting a consensus?
legendary
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Away on an extended break
Satoshi Nakamoto, faceless, extremely anonymous, perhaps shy, with an unknown home of abounding alacrity, advocated to pulverize every of the worst shortcomings of Fiat; and had endured for many years on the Internets, intending very much to replace and vaporize banknotes.

grammar fail
Brain fart.  Wink
It's 1.22 AM here, but it might be due the test I'm studying for.
sr. member
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Bitcoin today is what the internet was in 1998.
Satoshi Nakamoto, faceless, extremely anonymous, perhaps shy, with an unknown home of abounding alacrity, advocated to pulverize every of the worst shortcomings of Fiat; and had endured for many years on the Internets, intending very much to replace and vaporize banknotes.

grammar fail

It would be every shortcoming, I presume, but we would lose words.
rjk
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1ngldh
Satoshi Nakamoto, faceless, extremely anonymous, perhaps shy, with an unknown home of abounding alacrity, advocated to pulverize every of the worst shortcomings of Fiat; and had endured for many years on the Internets, intending very much to replace and vaporize banknotes.

grammar fail
legendary
Activity: 1918
Merit: 1570
Bitcoin: An Idea Worth Spending
Satoshi Nakamoto, faceless, extremely anonymous, perhaps shy, with an unknown home of abounding alacrity, advocated to pulverize all of the worst shortcomings of Fiat; and had endured for many years on the Internets, intending very much to replace and vaporize centralization.

According to http://www.wordcounttool.com/, we somehow added a word. The word count went from 40 to 41, therefore I strikethrough the word for.

~Bruno~
sr. member
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Bitcoin today is what the internet was in 1998.
Satoshi Nakamoto, faceless, extremely anonymous, perhaps shy, with an unknown home of abounding alacrity, advocated to pulverize every of the worst shortcomings of Fiat; and had endured for many years on the Internets, intending very much to replace and vaporize centralization.
legendary
Activity: 1288
Merit: 1227
Away on an extended break
Satoshi Nakamoto, faceless, extremely anonymous, perhaps shy, with an unknown home of abounding alacrity, advocated to pulverize every of the worst shortcomings of Fiat; and had endured for many years on the Internets, intending very much to replace and vaporize banknotes.
legendary
Activity: 1918
Merit: 1570
Bitcoin: An Idea Worth Spending
Satoshi Nakamoto, faceless, extremely anonymous, perhaps shy, with an unknown home of abounding alacrity, advocated to pulverize some of the worst shortcomings of Fiat; and had endured for many years on the Internets, intending very much to replace and vaporize banknotes.
full member
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Bitcoin is a food group.
Satoshi Nakamoto, faceless, extremely anonymous, perhaps shy, with an unknown home of abounding alacrity, plotted to pulverize some of the worst shortcomings of Fiat; and had endured for many years on the Internets, intending very much to replace and vaporize banknotes.
legendary
Activity: 1918
Merit: 1570
Bitcoin: An Idea Worth Spending
Satoshi Nakamoto, faceless, extremely anonymous, perhaps shy, with an unknown home of abounding alacrity, plotted to demolish some of the worst shortcomings of Fiat; and had endured for many years on the Internets, intending very much to replace and vaporize banknotes.
sr. member
Activity: 294
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Bitcoin today is what the internet was in 1998.
Satoshi Nakamoto, faceless, extremely anonymous, and shy, with an unknown home of abounding alacrity, plotted to demolish some of the worst shortcomings of Fiat; and had endured for many years on the Internets, intending very much to replace and vaporize banknotes.
legendary
Activity: 1918
Merit: 1570
Bitcoin: An Idea Worth Spending
Satoshi Nakamoto, faceless, extremely anonymous, and shy, with an unknown home of abounding alacrity, plotted to demolish some of the worst shortcomings of Fiat; and had endured for many years on the Internets, intending very much to distress and vaporize banknotes.

'cried Miss Crawford with alacrity' Mansfield Park. Jane Austen

That's the spirit! (although I needed to Google that--EXCELLENT!) Hopefully, the resulting paragraph does succumb to a too heavy laden verbiage one.

We're damn close now. Maybe only a few more, and we may complete the task.

~Bruno~
hero member
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Satoshi Nakamoto, faceless, extremely anonymous, and shy, with an unknown home of abounding alacrity, plotted to demolish some of the worst shortcomings of Fiat; and had endured for many years on the Internets, intending very much to distress and vaporize banknotes.

'cried Miss Crawford with alacrity' Mansfield Park. Jane Austen
legendary
Activity: 1288
Merit: 1227
Away on an extended break
Satoshi Nakamoto, faceless, extremely anonymous, and shy, with an unknown home of abounding hashish, plotted to demolish some of the worst shortcomings of Fiat; and had endured for many years on the Internets, intending very much to distress and vaporize banknotes.
legendary
Activity: 1918
Merit: 1570
Bitcoin: An Idea Worth Spending

BTCruce Nakamoto, faceless, extremely pregnant, and rich, with an unknown home of abounding hashish, plotted to demolish some of the worst shortcomings of Fiat; and had endured for many years on the Internets, intending very much to distress and vaporize BTCitcoin.


I've modified the original premise of this exercise, dancupid (see my last post), going from going-for-the-funny to get-serious. Would you be so kind as to try your editing hand again? Thanks, bud.

~Bruno~

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Satoshi Nakamoto, faceless, extremely private, and rich, with an unknown home of abounding hashes, plotted to demolish some of the worst shortcomings of Fiat; and had endured for many years on the Internets, intending very much to distress and vaporize BTCitcoin.

I'll try again (again) - I'll try to invoke my muse in my next modification.

Fair enough, bud.

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Satoshi Nakamoto, faceless, extremely private, and shy, with an unknown home of abounding hashish, plotted to demolish some of the worst shortcomings of Fiat; and had endured for many years on the Internets, intending very much to distress and vaporize banknotes.



The following is approximately where I would like to see to end up with--factual and to the point.

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Satoshi Nakamoto, faceless, extremely private, perhaps shy, of an unknown home of abounding hashish (needed), plotted to demolish some of the worst shortcomings of Fiat; and had endured (enduring(?) but we loose words) for many years on the Internets, intending very much to distress and vaporize banknotes (may need to be tighter/more precise).



Let's continue.

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Satoshi Nakamoto, faceless, extremely private, and shy, with an unknown home of abounding hashish, plotted to demolish some of the worst shortcomings of Fiat; and had endured for many years on the Internets, intending very much to distress and vaporize banknotes.

On the service, my next suggestion may come across as crazy or stupid, but I'll express it nonetheless.

I would love to see the final edited iterations published in some magazine, hopefully one sold at Barnes & Noble.

~Bruno~
hero member
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BTCruce Nakamoto, faceless, extremely pregnant, and rich, with an unknown home of abounding hashish, plotted to demolish some of the worst shortcomings of Fiat; and had endured for many years on the Internets, intending very much to distress and vaporize BTCitcoin.


I've modified the original premise of this exercise, dancupid (see my last post), going from going-for-the-funny to get-serious. Would you be so kind as to try your editing hand again? Thanks, bud.

~Bruno~

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Satoshi Nakamoto, faceless, extremely private, and rich, with an unknown home of abounding hashes, plotted to demolish some of the worst shortcomings of Fiat; and had endured for many years on the Internets, intending very much to distress and vaporize BTCitcoin.

I'll try again (again) - I'll try to invoke my muse in my next modification.
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