Mistake: Doesn't express that Jesus is God along with His Father and the Holy Spirit. Together they are God. Apart, each of them is God. Yet only One God, not three Gods. Miracle.
It isn't mistake. Jesus isn't God. Don't avoid the truth and bump answered questions/statements under unanswered questions/statements.
Mistake: Doesn't express that Jesus died, arose again, and is alive now.
Jesus didn't die.
Mistake: doesn't express that Jesus made no mistakes... not even one... not even a little one.
I will have to take a look on it. Don't want to comment without reference.
Mistake: Doesn't express that when Jesus lived and then died, He was taking the punishment for the sins of all the people that ever lived and will live.
Why should Jesus take it? Jesus never died and even if you believe Jesus did, it was never for the sins of the people. Jesus was attacked because Romans understood Jesus is dangerous to them.
Mistake: Doesn't express that when Jesus arose from death, He was showing that He has power even over death.
Jesus didn't die.
Mistake: Doesn't express that the only way to Heaven is to accept the work that Jesus did for the forgiveness of wrongdoing.
At the time of Jesus, you go to heaven through Jesus. But... this is the time of another prophet. Jesus has told another prophet will come and you must believe in that prophet. Yet, you don't.
Jesus didn't for the sins of people.
Mistake: Doesn't point to the Bible as the only true Word of God.
Wrong! It tells Bible, Jew's holy books
were true word of God but it is edited unlike Qur'an.
Lots of mistakes. The list goes on and on, including that the universe as we know it is not billions of years old, but is at absolute most only 25,000, but is probably only 6,000.
Wrong. There is no mistakes because all the mistakes you pointed isn't mistakes, it is already solved.