Everyone,
We are working on a second DigiByte promotional video with a professional voiceover. So far here is the script we have. What does everyone think? What other hit points can we make?
Remember our goal is to keep things as simple and straight forward as possible.
Okay, so, what is a DigiByte?
DigiByte is a form of currency. Kinda like dollars, euros, yen, or even bitcoin.
But unlike traditional currencies, DigiByte doesn’t require a financial institution for transactions to take place.
While a dollar might be sent from one person’s bank to a credit card processor to another person’s bank, DigiBytes are sent directly from peer-to-peer.
And by cutting out the middleman, you’re cutting out most of the processing fees that typically come along with each transaction.
But each transaction still needs to be verified, to ensure that someone doesn’t spend the same DigiByte twice.
So each DigiByte transaction is verified electronically by other peers in the DigiByte network - and they get a little reward for doing so.
DigiBytes can be sent and received anywhere in the world with an internet connection.
Unlike Bitcoin, DigitByte transactions are fully confirmed within 3 minutes, instead an hour.
And DigiByte’s state-of-the-art security makes it 5 times more secure than Bitcoin.
You send data in megabytes and gigabytes, why not send money in DigiBytes?
Get your DigiByte wallet today at digibyte.co
should it be "instead of an hour" on line 9?
yes, i think so too. it should be "instead of an hour" on Line 9.
ORIGINAL: Okay, so, what is
a DigiByte?
SUGGESTION: Okay, so what is Digibyte?
REASON: sounds better in my opinion. no obligation. just my 2 cents.
ORIGINAL: And by cutting out the middleman, you’re cutting out most of the processing fees that typically come along with each transaction.
SUGGESTION:
Using Digibytes will cut out the middleman,
saving you from most of the processing fees that typically come along with each transaction.
REASON: emphasize on "using" digibytes.
ORIGINAL: So each DigiByte transaction
is verified electronically...
SUGGESTION: So each DigiByte transaction
will be verified electronically...
REASON: better English? haha...need approval from other people here.
ORIGINAL: DigiBytes can be sent and received anywhere in the world with an internet connection.
SUGGESTION:
You can send and receive Digibytes anywhere in the world with an internet connection.
REASON: Putting the user + Digibyte into the picture together rather than solely focusing on Digibyte. From what i have learn from my Marketing lessons if i am not mistaken, never separate the Consumer and the Product. important to repeatedly make links/connections between the 2 of them.