The opening paragraph was edited to lead on a higher note.
Let me know if you want any changes (better title or anything else).
It will likely remain on the first page for 1 or 2 days.
I could tell you have a great 'back story' that I think you should elaborate on in subsequent articles. Your story is one of the key reasons why we have: 'A Conversation' a page dedicated to helping other coins heal and rebuild after PND and/or mgmt abuses. Your article will likely go there after it leaves the front page.
Very nice! Thanks for the edits! Looks great!